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Tuesday, 11 November 2014
Descriptive Writing
Heine - The bark is as smooth as a hippopotamus's back.
Siddhesh - The trees are as big as a T-Rex.
Vatsal - It looks as tall as a giant.
Sneha - I think the trees need a ginormous seed to grow.
Anees - The bark is as amazing as the Diwali fireworks. The colourful bark is as colourful as the seven colours of the spectrum.
Aryan D - The bark is as colourful as Paige's skirt.
Ya Ya - The bark is as colourful as a rainbow.
James - It looks like it's painted.
Henry - The tree is colourful as a rainbow.
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Great writing Room 20. I really like these pictures and your sentences are super descriptive too.
ReplyDeleteMiss Skipper